“Daddy…….. Daddy…….”
“Did you see it again, baby?”
She hugged him tightly and said, “Yes, dad. Again same black cat pulled my quilt, jumped over the table and scratching the drawer”.
“Sleep, my dear. All will be fine”
“You are saying the same from last ten years. I want to know what’s in the drawer, who has locked it. Where is the key?”
“I swear, I don’t have the key. I tried to open it by all means but its not”
She cried and pulled her bedsheet. Numerous thoughts, questions were weaving the web in mind and struggling to come out of it. She had become the cocoon within it from many years and want to come out from it resolving it and emerging into a new life.
She put her all positive thoughts and woke up in the morning in search of the answer. She digs the toolbox to open the drawer, she took a knife to break it but every attempt went vain.
She cried and cried….. She felt why her mom left her and ran away with another person. She hated her mom all these ten years but now she was missing her presence. She cried loudly calling her “Mooommmmm, I need you…”
The black cat jumped over her and pulled her dress. She saw some shadow near the table pointing to the drawer and its open.
She ran towards it and saw a letter reading “Your dad killed me. Run away before you turn 18. Mom loves you”.
(Word Count: 250)
This is in response to below prompts.
Fiction Monday by Vinitha for the below photo prompt and word prompt: Shadow. Writing a tale using any one or both the prompts within 250 words.
Ending is unpredictable…Great post
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Thank you Deepi. Glad you liked it 🙂
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Wow, What an ending!!
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Thank you Prajna. Happy to hear 🙂
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OMG! This is real spooky. Maybe she is inheriting something when she is 18, or blocking her father,,s interest in some way.
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Yeah, you caught it right. So only she is still alive. Thanks Reena for your view.
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Kept me on the edge of my seat!
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I am glad to hear that VJ. Thanks for reading 🙂
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My pleasure!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
The cat and the drawer ….. by Shilpa Nairy
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Thank you so much Reena 🙂
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Soooperrr Nairy
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Thank you so much Kane. Glad you liked it and thanks for the comment.
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Now, that was a great punch line, with a definite punch.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and dropping the comment 🙂
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A thriller of a story, Shilpa. Great take. 🙂
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Thank you Aishwarya. Happy you liked it.
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You are welcome, Shilpa. 🙂
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Wow! The ending was mind blowing Shilpa!!
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It was a chilling read, Shilpa. The twist in the end was unexpected, to say the least. Thank you for joining #fictionmonday with this brilliant story, Shilpa. Hope to read your stories in the coming weeks too. 🙂
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Gave me goosebumps! And the twist in the end beats it all!
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Wow! A mother’s love never ends.
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